Tuesday, November 8, 2011
Point of View Story Switching
At 8:15, Sarah was standing at her locker, staring into a cracked mirror that hung insidee her locker. She double checked that there were no remenants of her morning meal stuck in her perfect teeth. She could see Tom talking to Leslie in the the middle of the dingy, crowded hallway. She turned around so fast she hurt here neck. She starts to think about how Tom looks at her, he doesn't remember when Leslie first came to school. Her old, retro sense of fashion. She begins to think about the time when she took Leslie under her guidance, changed her, made her into a proper fashion statement, like in that horrid move Clueless, staring Cher. Her clothes screamed 80's. Wearing disgusting chucks... Sarah can't believe that Leslie would have the nerve to talk to Tom, the young man in which Sarah was pining for, and going to ask to homecoming. How terrible.
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Be sure to proof read before posting. Good omniscient story.
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